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Watercolour Painting => Watercolour Encourager Sessions => Topic started by: Bill76434 on November 05, 2019, 10:11:53 PM

Title: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 05, 2019, 10:11:53 PM

Lot of time spent on this which I consider well spent. I will have another go on a larger paper (Full sheet)  in the near future.
Suggestions and critique welcome.

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Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Gita on November 05, 2019, 10:46:50 PM

This painting has turned out really well. The hair, the hands, the frills and other details!  :clap: :clap:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: njnjgirl on November 05, 2019, 11:01:24 PM

Bill, love the background, her hands and ruffles on the dress are so well done!  :clap: :clap: :clap:You have done a great job on the hair also, wow.  :yippee: My eye keeps going to the face..can you lighten the color a bit?

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: EmmaLee on November 05, 2019, 11:15:41 PM

Definitely time well spent. Great painting!

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: JayJ on November 06, 2019, 02:57:33 AM

 :clap: :clap:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 06, 2019, 05:15:10 AM

So pleased you like it  Gita, Mary lou, Emma and Zayn.
Yes Mary Lou I can lighten the face.

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: BeaSue on November 06, 2019, 07:10:10 PM

This is great, Bill! So much energy in this painting. You've done a stellar job on the shadows in the folds  and ruffles of her dress.

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: nolan on November 06, 2019, 07:57:49 PM

really great job Bill, well done :yippee: :yippee: :yippee:

The body area of the dress is a bit light on contrast. Check your reference to see where you can add some more dark values. That will give the body more depth and dimension O0

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 06, 2019, 09:42:18 PM

 :thankyou:Susan and Nolan I shall follow your suggestions  :)

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: nolan on November 07, 2019, 07:47:57 PM

 :gl2:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Cath on November 07, 2019, 11:13:15 PM

 :clap: :clap:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 08, 2019, 12:51:44 AM

 :thankyou: Cathy

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 08, 2019, 12:57:31 AM

Flamenco Dancer Revisited. I implemented the suggestions, it makes a big difference. With the knowledge gained I look forward to doing this again.

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Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: JayJ on November 08, 2019, 09:08:34 AM

Really makes a difference ! :clap:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: njnjgirl on November 08, 2019, 01:37:53 PM

Wow beautiful Bill.. :yippee: :yippee:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 08, 2019, 09:46:48 PM

 :thankyou: Zayn and Mary Lou.

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: nolan on November 10, 2019, 09:39:22 PM

big difference, well done Bill :clap: :clap: :clap:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 10, 2019, 10:01:34 PM

Thanks for the encouragement Nolan

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Gita on November 13, 2019, 04:54:59 AM

Lighting up the face was a great suggestion! I get drawn towards the face first and then the other details! Wow, what a difference!
I would frame this and hang it if I were you!  :clap: :clap:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 13, 2019, 05:34:55 AM

Thanks Gita, not this, the following one whicj I hope to be better, maybe?

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: DollyMauji on November 13, 2019, 05:43:06 AM

Wow! It is so beautiful! Her expression, her posture and the beautiful dress! Gorgeous!  :smitten:

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Post by: dennis on November 13, 2019, 05:55:22 AM

Much better  :clap: :clap: :clap:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 13, 2019, 08:28:05 AM

Thank you Dolly and Dennis

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Riya on November 22, 2019, 09:31:58 PM

Awesome painting Bill. The changes you have made, make such a difference :yippee: ...really a great painting,  :clap: :clap: :clap:

Title: Re: Flamenco Dancer
Post by: Bill76434 on November 22, 2019, 09:51:39 PM

 :thankyou: Riya, you are so kind.