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Watercolour Painting => Watercolour Encourager Sessions => Topic started by: Bill76434 on November 05, 2019, 10:11:53 PM
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Lot of time spent on this which I consider well spent. I will have another go on a larger paper (Full sheet) in the near future.
Suggestions and critique welcome.
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This painting has turned out really well. The hair, the hands, the frills and other details! :clap: :clap:
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Bill, love the background, her hands and ruffles on the dress are so well done! :clap: :clap: :clap:You have done a great job on the hair also, wow. :yippee: My eye keeps going to the face..can you lighten the color a bit?
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Definitely time well spent. Great painting!
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So pleased you like it Gita, Mary lou, Emma and Zayn.
Yes Mary Lou I can lighten the face.
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This is great, Bill! So much energy in this painting. You've done a stellar job on the shadows in the folds and ruffles of her dress.
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really great job Bill, well done :yippee: :yippee: :yippee:
The body area of the dress is a bit light on contrast. Check your reference to see where you can add some more dark values. That will give the body more depth and dimension O0
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:thankyou:Susan and Nolan I shall follow your suggestions :)
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:gl2:
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:clap: :clap:
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:thankyou: Cathy
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Flamenco Dancer Revisited. I implemented the suggestions, it makes a big difference. With the knowledge gained I look forward to doing this again.
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Really makes a difference ! :clap:
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Wow beautiful Bill.. :yippee: :yippee:
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:thankyou: Zayn and Mary Lou.
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big difference, well done Bill :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Thanks for the encouragement Nolan
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Lighting up the face was a great suggestion! I get drawn towards the face first and then the other details! Wow, what a difference!
I would frame this and hang it if I were you! :clap: :clap:
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Thanks Gita, not this, the following one whicj I hope to be better, maybe?
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Wow! It is so beautiful! Her expression, her posture and the beautiful dress! Gorgeous! :smitten:
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Much better :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Thank you Dolly and Dennis
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Awesome painting Bill. The changes you have made, make such a difference :yippee: ...really a great painting, :clap: :clap: :clap:
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:thankyou: Riya, you are so kind.