
Hello my Bella! I have finally seen this lesson, I'm slagged

! I don't know if you are done with this, but here is what I have found....along with an idea or two of my own.
It seems to me that you are just missing some horizontal lines in the water! I should have spotted that right from the start.

We do exactly the same thing in w/c and pencil... there's that recall problem again! Now I am not certain if they were added in with a bit of white, or lifted out. My internet is so slow and very difficult for me to go back through to pick it out.... so there's a bit of homework for you!

Or, you could just go and look at the other paintings in the lesson thread!
Hope this is helpful if you haven't already finished by now....these computers really should come with a crank!