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robynann

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on: May 15, 2018, 03:27:04 PM
Here is my newest gal. Something seems wrong with her right arm. In the reference photo it was worse. All boney and weird.I fixed it once already. Should I leave it or what?

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Reply #1 on: May 17, 2018, 11:38:00 AM
I am no expert, but I didn't notice anything when just viewing this in the gallery.  After reading your concern I did think it looked odd, but then she is in an odd posture.  Makes the painting interesting and as always, I love how you have done her face, hair, etc. :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :smitten:  I would leave it alone. Just my humble opinion.
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Reply #2 on: May 17, 2018, 01:31:40 PM
Thanks MaryLou. Yeah she is at an odd position. Let's see what others say. I'm all for leaving it.
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Reply #3 on: May 17, 2018, 04:45:29 PM
I love your sassy girls, Robynann.  I agree with Mary Lou.  What drew my attention was the deep dark shadow under her other arm.  Maybe add a bit of green background in the shadow so it's not so stark.

Otherwise, GREAT!!

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Reply #4 on: May 17, 2018, 07:14:21 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Another great painting Robynann   Patricia
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Reply #5 on: May 17, 2018, 11:05:08 PM
Good one Robyann, if anything I would thicken(widen) the lower part of the arm


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Reply #6 on: May 19, 2018, 03:43:31 AM
I too love your sassy girls.  :clap: :clap: :clap: Didn't notice the arm it's just the pose.
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Reply #7 on: May 24, 2018, 05:57:33 PM
Good job,like this sexy girl
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Reply #8 on: May 25, 2018, 01:02:20 PM
Thanks so much Mea, Patricia, Bill, Teresa and Maria. I'll make the corrections that were suggested.
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