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JayJ

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on: November 26, 2019, 08:08:13 AM

As usual I am still working on my texture painting!!! No matter how early I start!!!!
However am bit stuck with the composition.
I have used the third one and find it too busy!
Should I blur out ..or resize the composition?
Truly appreciate your input


« Last Edit: November 26, 2019, 08:19:09 AM by JayJ »
Zayn


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Reply #1 on: November 26, 2019, 11:52:50 AM
I like the first one.  :)
🖌️ WIN🎨


Annie.

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Reply #2 on: November 26, 2019, 03:14:44 PM
I am not good at composition.  But what about focusing on the pot, making the background smooth and blurry (maybe you can choose a soft contrasting color to make the pot pop-out), and get ride of the post in the middle.

Something in that line (maybe), again I am not good at manipulating with my rudimentary software Paint:
« Last Edit: November 26, 2019, 03:17:41 PM by Annie. »
Cheers, Annie
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JayJ

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Reply #3 on: November 26, 2019, 04:06:33 PM
 :thankyou: Win!
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Reply #4 on: November 26, 2019, 04:08:43 PM
Thank you Annie....yes it does take the noise out !...looks so much better.Thank you so much!
Zayn


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Reply #5 on: November 26, 2019, 06:36:19 PM
it is a great suggestion from Annie.

What I suggest is losing the hidden items in the background, then adding more colour to the scene something like this:


The orange in the pot and fruit (whatever it is, lol) will play up against the blue as they are opposites. Note I have moved the fruit to the third as it attracts a lot of attention. If you want the pot to be the focal point, leave the fruit out (or go with Annie's suggestion) O0


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Reply #6 on: November 26, 2019, 07:40:13 PM
Thank you Nolan!
No I had no intention of putting the fruit.
I like your suggestion too!colours do make a difference.will see how I get on.will try  both options.
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Reply #7 on: November 26, 2019, 09:53:01 PM
I look forward to the finished painting Zayn


njnjgirl

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Reply #8 on: November 26, 2019, 11:21:18 PM
This was interesting seeing how you are going to arrange your painting  Looking forward to  seeing the end result! :clap:
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JayJ

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Reply #9 on: November 27, 2019, 01:03:39 PM
Thank you Bill, Mary Lou!
 :heeha:
Zayn


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Reply #10 on: November 27, 2019, 06:20:08 PM
 :gl:


JayJ

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Reply #11 on: November 30, 2019, 12:35:53 PM
Thank you Nolan for excellent image.Dont know how you managed but was so easy to see!


It was very ambitious of me to think I could try both options🙈..with my reputation of working so slow.I first tried Nolan’s idea as I had ....already started working on half of it!...I barely finished..... :heeha: [size=78%]almost didn’t hand in..but I preserved.It is bit rushed painting..there are lot of things I need to learn!!!!![/size]


Thank you again Nolan,Annie and Win for your suggestion!
Zayn


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Reply #12 on: December 01, 2019, 07:18:46 PM
 :urwelcome: that is what we are here for - to help and support each other O0 :painting:


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Reply #13 on: December 01, 2019, 08:00:57 PM
🙏🏻Thank you Nolan!
 I don’t know why I felt hesitnat t to ask on the forum..know better!😊




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Reply #14 on: December 02, 2019, 07:50:35 PM
 :yippee: :cloud9:

Somebody once said to me "If you ask, you look stupid for a minute. If you don't ask, you will be stupid for a lifetime".

Never be shy on the forum. This is our safe place to ask "stupid" questions, show our disaster paintings, get opinions on anything art without being judged or looked down upon because it is through our mistakes that we learn. O0


 

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