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gartolf

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on: May 30, 2020, 08:42:32 PM
no 2 in the series collonges la rouge
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Reply #1 on: May 31, 2020, 09:23:04 PM
Good job Hans :clap: :clap: :clap:

I am just missing a few tonal values in this one though :-\
I can see the walls are at different angles by their lines, but the tonal values are all roughly the same. Look at the reference photo to see if there are a few more contrasts or shadows you can add to show the different angles more prominently O0


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Reply #2 on: June 01, 2020, 09:14:20 AM
Thanks Nolan I have replaced it with your recommendations  I totally agreed with your comments
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