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Denise808

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on: June 08, 2013, 08:37:26 AM
Here's my painting meant for the May challenge but I finished too late. It's fine though as I learned a lot trying to put what I've learned into practice. I'm ok with it but it just looks a little "blah". Any suggestions for improvement? Thanks  :)
« Last Edit: June 08, 2013, 08:39:15 AM by Denise320 »


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Reply #1 on: June 08, 2013, 04:33:29 PM
Looks nice, Denise. The tree trunk and the fence stand out to me - good shading! :)
Tania :D


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Reply #2 on: June 08, 2013, 04:52:39 PM
 :thankyou: Tania, appreciate the comment :)


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Reply #3 on: June 09, 2013, 12:32:35 AM
I agree with Tania. That tree trunk is fabulous!  :clap: :clap: :clap: You've done a great job, Denise!
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Reply #4 on: June 09, 2013, 02:57:53 AM
Yes, Denise, I agree with the others -- the tree trunk is great.  I think the "blah"ness you think you have is that the leaves on your beautiful trunk are dull compared to the more vibrant trees in the background.  Kick 'em up a notch!

Other than that, I think it's a very good piece of work.

aloha

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Reply #5 on: June 09, 2013, 03:35:58 AM
Ahh, I think you're right Mea,  :thankyou:  I'll kick it up some
 
 :thankyou: Jani :)
 
Guess it's kinda obvious that I enjoyed painting the trunk! ;D


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Reply #6 on: June 09, 2013, 04:06:16 AM
Painting looks great Denise. :clap:   I really like how you put dark litle squares on the house to make it look like different colored bricks were used to build it.  And I really like the tree on the far right side, it looks very realistic. :clap:
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Reply #7 on: June 09, 2013, 04:49:24 AM
Thanks Zac! really appreciate the comment :)  Dennis had a whole lesson on painting a brick house. . .
 
(yeay, I see Bob is back 8) )
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Reply #8 on: June 09, 2013, 04:25:19 PM
I think you did a beautiful job Denise!  The main tree is stunning.  :)
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Reply #9 on: June 09, 2013, 04:44:38 PM
 :thankyou: Natalie :smitten:


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Reply #10 on: June 10, 2013, 01:45:39 AM
 :clap: :clap: Hey Denise, I think your painting looks great.  Will look forward to seeing the "kicked up" leaves on the tree.  I'm glad to see Bob too!  :clap: :clap:
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Reply #11 on: June 10, 2013, 01:58:06 AM
Beautiful Denise.  I noticed this immediately.  I know what you mean in that I have produced some pieces that just need a little punch.  I find that darkening shadows or even adding some that weren't visible in the pic really pop the lighter areas.


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Reply #12 on: June 10, 2013, 07:29:40 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Oh! Denise, your painting is just too beautiful.  I agree with what everyone has said about your tree, it is gorgeous but then so is the rest of your painting too.  Patricia
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Reply #13 on: June 12, 2013, 12:14:03 AM
 :smitten: Dianne, Lynn and Patricia :thankyou: :thankyou: :thankyou: .
 I always really appreciate your comments and feedback :flowers:
 
I've punched up the tree top, I do think it looks better! Thank you Mea.
Lynn, I really think the shadows will help too, trying to decide where I would put them  :) The light is supposed to be coming from the right but I think it's so subtle right now that I could change it? .....
 
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Reply #14 on: June 12, 2013, 01:01:11 AM
Denise,

The punched up tree looks so much better.  Now it's proud to be a tree.

Nice work.

aloha

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