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Zilpa

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on: July 16, 2013, 06:52:23 AM
Hi all I have a favor to ask. I am going to put these kids in this painting. What do you think of the proportions? I think it is the right place for them but not sure of the size.
Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.  :thankyou:  :painting:



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Reply #1 on: July 16, 2013, 09:03:16 AM
Hi zilpa I agree I think this is the right place to paint the children, I also think the size is about right too but see what the others say  O0  love the sea looking forward to seeing the finished painting
jennylynn


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Reply #2 on: July 16, 2013, 10:18:21 AM
 :thankyou: Jenny, I am looking forward to finishing it over the next day or two. 


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Reply #3 on: July 16, 2013, 02:18:10 PM
Zilpa...I agree with Jenn...looks good. Will be a great painting when you are done. Look forward to seeing it.
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Reply #4 on: July 16, 2013, 02:56:25 PM
Lookin' good, Zilpa!
Cheers,
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Reply #5 on: July 16, 2013, 04:31:21 PM
I like the painting so far, and I think the proportions are about right. The only thing I might change is I think I would have the children right where the water is breaking. The little one seems to be looking down at his/her feet.
Alan


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Reply #6 on: July 16, 2013, 07:47:27 PM
Hi all I have a favor to ask. I am going to put these kids in this painting. What do you think of the proportions? I think it is the right place for them but not sure of the size.
Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.  :thankyou:  :painting:


Proportions are fine.  It's two items though.  I'd add a pail with a shovel in it for the third item.  Don't forget footprints and/or impressions in the sand.
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Reply #7 on: July 16, 2013, 09:34:32 PM
looks great to me too  O0


Zilpa

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Reply #8 on: July 16, 2013, 10:52:41 PM
Thanks everyone now I feel confident to take it to the next level and yes I had intended shadows, footprints had not thought of bucket and spade though good idea.


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Reply #9 on: July 17, 2013, 12:51:40 AM
looks really right to me too. love the seascape so much :clap: :clap:
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Reply #10 on: July 17, 2013, 01:06:47 AM
Can't wait to see what you come up with.....  :clap:


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Reply #11 on: July 17, 2013, 06:03:36 AM
 :thankyou: Brony and Val I hope to finish it over the weekend


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Reply #12 on: July 17, 2013, 10:42:12 AM
Stoney, proportion looks good to me.  Kids are on a cross of thirds so that is a great place for them.  Not sure I would move them up to the water as that would take them out of the 'Sweet Spot' 1/3's... as it is, it looks like older kid is trying to encourage younger one to go in.  If you want you could bring a bit of the water to them where they are.   But you are the Artist, so you decide!  I like the overlay to test it, smart idea   O0

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