PA - LESSON #8 - Figures in Pastel

[Vidar]

  to all for the feedback

[Lisa gale]

 

[Vidar]

  Lisa

[Juan Carlos]

Vidar,

Your figures are very well proportioned and the tree with very nice detail. COngrats.

[Vidar]

  Juan

[Danielle123]

Lovely Vidar, your little people are well done. 

[Lajets]

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Ok so this is my attempt for this lesson.  I was a little stressed as it wasn't working out the more I tried to correct it the worst it got. I was wondering having the paper 160 gsm does that make it more awkward when using water to it

Any way thanks Dennis

[Val]

Very nicely done      I would just suggest a few more leaves across the front of the tree. Great job on the people. 

[Win]

 

[Lajets]

  Val and Win  I was so ready to conveniently miss place it as using the paintbrush just wasn't working and I don't wont to just blame the brush this was my 3rd attempt and the other two made it in the bin I'll fix the leaves and leave it alone lesson 9 here I come

[Lajets]

Details

My final attempt possibly still more leave but its over for me with this one

[Juan Carlos]

Good work Lajets.

I would go a little more darker on the foreground to contrast the grass where the people are walking by. Just a thought.