Danielle's portrait drawing

[cyril]

 i think the shading above the left eye appears as if there is a  slight dent....

  Overall the drawing looks great Danielle..

[Paulaj]

Danielle,

You knocked this one out of the ball park    Great job.

[Danielle123]

 :thankyou:so much Mea, Paula and  Cyril for your comments and advices
Cyril I have made those corrections and a bit more tweeking here and there. I will post it again later if there is no more changes to be made.   

[Lisa From Oto]

Gorgeous drawing Danielle 

[jillh]

 Danielle she is beautiful.  You have done an awesome job.  Still think you can blend our the white a fraction.   Then it will be perfection!

[sally13]

Absolutely beautiful Danielle. The only thing I see is that there is no different tonal value between the eyes and eyebrows, it appears to me to be the same as above the eyebrow. I think it might give her that slightly more sedate look that she has in the picture. Not forgetting that I have not ever done portraits before so Im no expert. Overall you drawing is magnificent.

[Bev S.]

Don't know how I missed this glorious little creature!!! What a mass of hair and Danielle you have done such a great job of drawing it! You have done a fabulous job of the whole portrait, in fact!! the only thing I would say, is look at her (our) left cheek. . . .there seems to be a line of dark shading where there shouldn't be one. . . .I see it in the photograph, but I think it needs to be feathered out more and blended into the value of her cheek.  What do you think?  I think you have captured the likeness so very well. . . . .you go girl!!!

PS: I think Sally has a point. . . . .

[Danielle123]

  Jill, Lisa Sally and Bev, I do so appreciate all you advice, it helps me better my drawing.
  Bev which white do you mean the same that Cyril mentioned, if so I have done that change, but I did not posted that correction yet. 
  Sally, what do you suggest I do for the white below the eyebrow, should I put a bit of shade right under the eyebrow?  There is a bit of shade but I guess it is not noticeable enough.
 :confused:Bev,  do you mean that little straight line about 1/4" from the left side of the mouth?
Thank you all so much.

[sally13]

Sorry if ive confused you Danielle, I guess I mean that in the photo her eyelids are slightly darker and coming out of her eyelids up towards the eyebrow slightly, I don't know what that part is called. This will give a little more depth above the eye.

[Danielle123]

Sally, i might have to work that tonal value again, my forever problem.     

[JayJ]

Danielle u are very talented!

[Danielle123]

  so much for you comment Jay.

[nolan]

beautiful so far Danielle

the shading on the left hand side of her face must still come out further to show her rosy cheeks

[Bev S.]

the shading on the left hand side of her face must still come out further to show her rosy cheeks

That is what I was trying to say, Daniella. . . . I just didn't say it right!!!

[Danielle123]

  Jay and Nolan, i will make the corrections and poste it as soon as I can.
To everyone I would like to thank you for all your support/advice I truely appreciate.