PA - Lesson #22 - Woodland Path

[dennis]

Lovely painting, Juan Carlos You still need to bring out the focal point. The figure is lost in your painting

[Danielle123]

lovely painting, just bring out you people a bit as per Dennis comment.  I would also add a bit more value to see the path in the distance. (very little value just to see the form of the path). i would also add more green of the trees in the black (just so it does not end abruptly) hope this helps   

[Juan Carlos]

Well, I hope this version goes as closer to the given advices.

Thank you Dennis for pointing out the focal point!! I guess the person was a bit hidden!!

  Danielle for your important remarks.

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Cheers

[Danielle123]

  Juan

[MaryAnne Long]

Juan Carlos,

This version is much better - better contrasts.

You are improving each time!

aloha

mea

[Juan Carlos]

  Mea.

[Tousabella]

Wow...the improvements really make a great difference.  Well done, Juan.

[Juan Carlos]

Thanks a lot Retta for your encouragement words.

[dennis]

Much better, Juan Carlos

[Vidar]

It was maybe not the best lesson to try the first time ever using pastel, but i decided to give it at try.
Working with pastel must be like drawing a painting.
It was very fun to do but I had pigment all over the place in a short time

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[MaryAnne Long]

Vidar,

Pretty good work with the pastels.

I like the luminescent eerieness that this piece has.

aloha

mea

[Vidar]

  Mea.

[Juan Carlos]

The path and the trees very well done. Also, you extended the sky to the left which gives light to the trees in the back. Keep on the good painting.

[Vidar]

Juan- Carlos