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Kevin W

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Reply #1245 on: June 16, 2015, 04:44:13 PM
Attempt #2, in progress. Shadows I think are slightly better. Dark leaves look nicer too. Need to relook at the bottom leaf, and finish the stem.

Kevin


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Reply #1246 on: June 16, 2015, 08:28:53 PM
much better contrasts this time yes O0


Kevin W

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Reply #1247 on: June 17, 2015, 04:37:50 PM
Thanks Nolan.

I've been looking at it today. It looks very flat. The back leaf needs to go way back, and its curled tip even more so. Maybe the bottom leaf should overlap the petal more. Would like it to look a bit more twisted. Also need to follow a reference photo more closely for the gap between the front petals. I am happy with the front leaf though.
Kevin


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Reply #1248 on: June 18, 2015, 09:07:51 PM
Kevin, I don't want you to be too hard on yourself in the beginning. As long as you understand the concepts in each lesson, the fine tuning will automatically come as you progress through the lessons. O0


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Reply #1249 on: June 18, 2015, 09:09:39 PM
Pretty good Kevin.     :clap: :clap: :clap:


Kevin W

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Reply #1250 on: June 20, 2015, 02:59:42 PM
Thanks Danielle
Kevin


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Reply #1251 on: June 20, 2015, 04:41:57 PM
Kevin, nice tulip and awesome mountain!!
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Reply #1252 on: June 21, 2015, 02:56:07 AM
Nice tulip, and you already tried to adapt by doing a yellow and blue one.  I admire you for that.  I stick to the lesson as close as possible, hoping that after I have some technique under my belt, I will be able to start adapting.

So good for you, keep posting your work.   :clap: :clap: :clap:
Cheers, Annie
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Reply #1253 on: September 02, 2015, 08:45:37 PM
Done for someone special
alas no longer here.
Mark


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Reply #1254 on: September 02, 2015, 08:48:30 PM
Mark,

How sweet of you to remember someone with such a lovely tulip.  Excellent blending.

aloha

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Reply #1255 on: September 02, 2015, 09:33:42 PM
 :clap: :clap: :clap:  Very nicely done Mark.   Patricia
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Reply #1256 on: September 02, 2015, 09:47:15 PM
well done Bill, sorry about the loss though :'(

just add a shadow cast by the flower onto the stem where the base of the flower meets the stem O0


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Reply #1257 on: September 03, 2015, 12:21:52 PM
Thank you for your views and comments.
Mark


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Reply #1258 on: September 03, 2015, 01:29:08 PM
Well done Mark.  :clap: :clap: :clap:
Cheers, Val

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Reply #1259 on: January 18, 2016, 08:44:08 PM

Before I get up the courage to try the waterdrops, I thought I'd post the tulip painting as in for any feedback!
Cheers,
Sharon


 

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