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Danielle123

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Reply #120 on: April 12, 2015, 02:05:12 AM
 :thankyou: So much Lisa for your encouragement


Juan Carlos

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Reply #121 on: April 12, 2015, 02:02:41 PM
Well done Danielle!! Like the work on that smoke, it really makes the train moving formward!!


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Reply #122 on: April 12, 2015, 04:41:45 PM
 :thankyou: Juan for the encouragement.


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Reply #123 on: April 12, 2015, 09:09:28 PM
 :heeha: Beautiful work Danielle  O0 :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Danielle123

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Reply #124 on: April 12, 2015, 09:19:03 PM
 :thankyou: So much Val. 


Juan Carlos

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Reply #125 on: May 28, 2015, 04:11:21 PM
Hi everyone,

I'm jumping ahead with the classes, just this once. My son loves trains and happens that this class was perfect to give him this gift for his room. So, this is also my rendition to the Steam Train lesson, which is also a free commition. Critics and comments are well received.


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Reply #126 on: May 28, 2015, 04:13:27 PM
Juan your colors look really faded, perhaps this is a bad photograph.
"Never stop Dreaming" 
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Reply #127 on: May 28, 2015, 04:22:33 PM
It's a great drawing Juan-you have a lot of tooth left in your paper which makes it look faded. I would personally strengthen the train an smoke colors to bring them out.
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Reply #128 on: May 28, 2015, 06:17:07 PM
Yeah. I guess it's the way a took the picture, the flash maybe. I'll change it. Here are both versions, different light source.

 :thankyou: for your comments Bellarina and Natalie, appreciate it.

flash light

natural light

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Reply #129 on: May 28, 2015, 07:23:46 PM
Very well done, Juan Carlos :clap: :clap: :clap:  Just round off the bottom of the boiler at the front a bit more - looks like it is dented O0
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Reply #130 on: May 28, 2015, 11:23:51 PM
Much nicer w/o the flash.
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Reply #131 on: May 29, 2015, 12:51:08 AM
 :thankyou: Natalie for your important remarks. My humble camera thinks that everything has to be flashed out!!!

Dennis, I folllowed your important suggestion. Attached are both versions to see the difference (I hope there's one!!! :2funny:)


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Reply #132 on: May 29, 2015, 01:14:22 AM
 O0 :clap: :clap: :clap: Juan Carlos
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Reply #133 on: May 29, 2015, 02:04:35 AM
Wow, what a difference.  Outstanding painting Juan.  :clap:
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Reply #134 on: May 29, 2015, 02:26:14 AM
lovely painting Juan, your sun will be very happy. :clap: :clap: :clap:


 

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