LESSON #4 - Anthuriums

[Val]

Nicely done Fi. I like the colourings in the flowers, I agree with Mea the white (shiny) bits are a bit too wide, a bit of variation there will fix that right up. I would like to see a few more deeper darks in the shaded areas to add a bit more dimension.

[Danielle123]

Very nice Fiona, and I do agree with Natalie, Val and Mea,  also do put a shadow to the bottom left leave to separate it from the flower.

[Fiona]

Thank you ladies for your comments   

I have taken your advice and darkened some of the tones, added a few shadows played around with the "shiny" stripes (to the point where I can nearly see through the paper).  I'm still not totally happy with this one and will redo it sometime using a smoother paper I think.



Cheers
Fi

[Bellarina]

Much better Fiona

[Danielle123]

It makes a difference, well done Fiona.   

[Sacgal/Sharon]

A big improvement, Fiona! You've done a good job...I bet if you redid this it would be even better now that you understand the techniques..I know I want to redo a couple of these myself just to keep improving.

[dennis]

Well done, Fiona

[Tousabella]

Wow...what a difference!  It's lovely, Fiona.  Great picture.