LESSON #96 - The Old Mill

[Pinuccia]

Sharon your painting of the Old Mill is beautiful. The trees the building how you have caught the light just great congrats.

[BeaSue]

Fine job, Sharon!

[Danielle123]

Beautifully done Sharron,  i do agree with Nina for the wheel.  All it is is the perspective it should be smaller as it is farther then front part.     

[ncwren]

 

[Sacgal/Sharon]

Details

Thanks, everyone - here's my attempt at making the wheel look better!

[MaryAnne Long]

Yup, Sharon, the wonky wheel is better now.

The very bottom of the front/side wall is a tiny bit out of line - not perfectly perpendicular.

Otherwise, it's great.   Just love those tree skeletons!

aloha

mea

[sally13]

Great job Sharon

[Sacgal/Sharon]

Thanks mea and Sally. And since this is an old mill it's settled so no perpendicular lines required!!

[Danielle123]

Much better that weel. 

[Pinuccia]

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Here  is my Old Mill revised. I did a few adjustments .  Need your comments. Thank you Pinuccia.

[Pinuccia]

[smg id=18983 I do not know if my first photo was posted here so I am sending another of the revised  "The old Mill". Your comments will be greatly  appreciated.  I altered the left hand trees and brought them down to the bridge. The right hand trees brought further in and added some green  on the right hand side. Separated the right hand side brick wall from  the small upper brick wall. I thought I had better stop before I completely spoil the painting. Looking forward to hearing from you.  Ciao  Pinuccia.

[njnjgirl]

Sharon, your painting is beautiful and your wheel looks perfect now. Wonderful job

Pinuccia, I think your revised painting is perfect too!

[BeaSue]

Good job on those revisions, Pinuccia! This is a challenging lesson, isn't it? I'm finishing up mine now, and hope to post it shortly.

[Danielle123]

very good Pinnucia,  the tree looks in front now.   

[ncwren]

Nice work ladies